Wednesday, 1 August 2018

Slam poetry

Respect


You need to respect others
but why?
when it’s a bother to me  
It is not nice to be a bully
when you could be a leader
Bullies will not get far
when leaders will
Respect means you will let others go first
then you can go last
Look after others, help when you need to
Pick up rubbish that is on the ground
it can get around animals necks
Look after others belongings
because it’s a nice thing to do  
respecting others leads to good things in life
When you respect others you can come a good leader
Respecting others
should be what helps you get further in your life
You should look after your teacher and friends at school
But I want to go to the mall because it's cool

Looking after others is a good thing to do in life

we have been doing slam poems in our class this week. The poems that we have wrote have came from our harts

2 comments:

  1. Hi my name is Isra! I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I really like your slam poem. It is true that bullying is not good at all. It reminded me of when I made a poem. Did you check your spelling when you posted your blog post? If you want to check my blog here it is https://wpsisrar.blogspot.com/

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  2. Kia ora Lara,
    My name is Missy and I am a year seven student in Te Ngahere at Paihia School. I really enjoyed reading your Slam Poetry about Respect, it is very inspiring. I think you did an awesome job and keep up the hard work.

    Yours truly,
    Missy

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Thank-you for your positive, helpful, thoughtful comment.