Wednesday 13 March 2019

Blue Poem








this is my poem about blue that me and my class room have bean doing

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Lara,
    My name is Dianne and I am a year 7 student at St Pius School, I really love your DLO, I think that it is amazing because you have used interesting words.

    My favourite colour is blue and what is your favourite colour?
    If you did another colour?, which colour would you do?

    Keep up the fantastic work!
    Dianne

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  2. Hi Lara ,
    I like how you set up your work , I love the describing words you have used.
    Your writing is very interesting.

    Good work

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